I also fixed that two word constructions you detailed, are there anymore? If you could give some examples of 'prose being repetitive', I thought I had took care of it, besides the 'Beware' paragraph, I did not see any.Just the first partв†’'was not going by the label standards' Did you just want that one part of the quote broken up, or the whole thing?.I believe that GA shouldn't rely on social websites like Myspace. Second thing, try to avoid using word constructions like 'During an Auglistening session' or 'a July 2013 interview'. For example, you can write that 'The song became digitally available the following day.' to avoid repeating with the text about the lead single 'Beware'.

the first criteria (the prose being repetitive) hasn't been addressed yet.visually, it isn't plausible to have so many small paragraphs in the 'Singles'.don't see a reason why 'next ten days' should be quoted.So on August 14, 2013, the song was sent to mainstream urban radio.Can you change 'completely original songs' with previously unreleased songs? The mixtape consisted of completely original songs.

'and every album after' should be dropped because it sounds like an uncertain intention rather than a fact.

The quotation can start with 'I'm not going by the club standards'.

the quote 'was not going by the label standards' should be paraphrased without quote marks.

I'll just list the things left to be done:

contribs) 23:00, 27 February 2014 (UTC) ДЄlright, third time, hope this one will be lucky.

Big sean beware quotes